Please critique

Attached are a couple of pics of some advertising I did at 3 local fairs. According to the fair organizers, somewhere between 75,000 and 100,000 people passed by my signs. All were in high traffic/visibility areas such as in front of dining halls, bathrooms, outdoor eating areas, show stages. Each fair had either 2 or three signs with the same message. There is almost no way someone could come to a fair and not see at least one of my signs and all the fairs were within 15 miles of my community.

I got 1 call.

What would you have done differently?



Wheat Hill