Help with mailer please!

Hi, I am a newbie that doesn’t have a park yet but I am going to start my first mail campaign. Does anybody have any suggestions about what to put in my letter?

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Ward

My husband and I are fellow mobile home park enthusiast, who recently came across your property located in Somewhere, IN and wanted to express our interest to purchasing your property.

We are looking to purchase a property in the very near future. Based on the size and location of your property, we feel that it might be a perfect fit for us.

If you aren’t interested in selling today, please hold onto my contact information and think of us when you decide the time is right.

We truly appreciate your time and consideration!

Kind Regards,

Mike and Megan Bridgette
xxx-xxx-xxxx
xxxxxxx@gmail.com