Asking for feedback on CL ads

I am doing my first Craigslist ads tied to Youtube videos and I would appreciate some feedback if you have the time. Go to Ohio - Youngstown - Real Estate for Sale - Sun Nov 7 - “several mobile homes for sale - seller financing”. There are 4 homes for sale and 4 videos.

What do you think and what could I have done better?

BTW: This was a spur-of-the-moment sort of thing and the actual posting of the videos took many hours. Sony camcorders and Mac computers do not go well together. As much as I dislike PCs, it really would have been easier had I used one.



Wheat Hill